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why does it feel like you dont have a choice? every choice end in the same i feel like nothing changed from my decisions

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If you had read the descriptions above you would have noticed, but I'll copy it here. "Decisions will award points with the characters and unlock certain extra scenes, but will not influence the plot of the story." That means they unlock certain scenes, expand some of them and give you access to some naughty things with their corresponding CGs, but the essence of the story remains the same.

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Early next month. :3

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my favs in order
1. Toki (this is basically my boyfriend minus being comp savy)
2. Erik (crushing on proff is hot)
3. Jack (one of my fav tropes, wont spoil hehe)
surprised Montiano isnt an option tho 

Proff is totally HOT.

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williem and jack (i think thats his name?) has my heart.

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Willem :3

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Comments are always welcome.

That said, this is not After Class.

To begin with, when reading this VN you should bear in mind that it should not be approached with prejudices or preconceived ideas about other VNs.

This is not an idyllic story where you fall in love with someone, have problems and then solve them.

I will warn you from now on that this story, even if it doesn't seem so for now, is cruel.

This story is about Emeka's life, not any other random MC that can be renamed.

I fully understand the position that you might not like Emeka and that he can be a bit unbearable, but there are reasons for that, it's not gratuitous.

As for complaining that there are no routes, I'll give you some reasons.

Firstly, this is not a story that moulds itself to the reader, it tells the story of Emeka's life.

Emeka is in love with the five main characters for some reason.

Life isn't exactly fair and there is no perfect path to follow, we don't choose who we fall in love with. That is an important part of this story, but there is something much more complex behind it. It's not all about dating and homoerotic situations.

On the other hand, not everyone feels the need to fuck everyone at the drop of a hat. Some people just aren't like that.

Finally I would like to mention that feeling of chasing five guys at once and the fact that you hate it. The easiest way to answer that is simply to say that's how Emeka feels all the time.

Love hurts.

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Man, I love Erik's Path so far. It's a cruel combination of Bright Passion and Unpredictable Events... 

I wish that Emeka will get to be with Erik soon enough, it melts my heart when they are together.

Good Job with the game so far, I really enjoyed it !

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Can merry be a character route he's hot

I don't understand how to unlock the CG on Day 8.
I tried all the choices and combinations, but nothing.
May I ask a little hint?
By the way, so far the game it's really good, I can't wait to see the next events.

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There are currently 3 unlockable CGs in the public build.

One on day 5 (not Erik's), one on day 6 and one on day 8.

To unlock these scenes, you have to have made good decisions and have enough points with the character with whom the event takes place.

Not all points are required to unlock it, but almost. If you select the dream at the beginning of a specific character it will be easier to unlock his scenes because they are 5 extra points.

And I've already said too much :3

Does the last word of the detective for real? I'm a bit confused for he is one of the main characters.

As you can imagine I can't answer that question without spoilers. ;3

Haha, okay. I will wait for the next update then. :D

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Why do I get notifications for this game, like every day when there is no update?

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Well, I don't know.

I just posted the patch notes for next month and an extra devlog this month for the anniversary, nothing else.

In theory you should have received a total of only 3 notifications this month.

I keep getting this

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Hmph... that's weird. I'll see what I can do and thanks for reporting it.

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Am I the only one who can't figure out how to turn off narration? I don't have it on on my laptop... Awesome game!

how did you turn it off, all of a sudden narrator is on, and when i press the windows key and control and enter it says narrator is already off. i can't figure out how it turned on only when in the game. and how to turn it off D:

You have to press the "V" key on your keyboard to dissable the narrator :D

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Why must you break my heart like this Matt?

He was my favorite AAAAA

Só faltava colocar em português 😋😋

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vaya realmente me gusto esta novela visual tiene tanto potencial y da un toque de misterio que te hace preguntar que deparará el futuro de cada personaje basado en los puntos que obtengas 

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isn't this kinda too forcing ?
im trying to really only focus on willem only currently
trying my best to avoid anything romantic with Erik and Tobi (friendzone area)
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kiss Erik . is there no way to avoid that? ;-; i feel like alot of the decisions (the avoiding one like leaving,trying to go by unnoticed,or trying not to flirt) do the opposite .

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The story unfolds like this:

For some reason, Emeka is in love with the 5 main protagonists.

There are no routes. It is a linear story that tells how Emeka's life develops as you get to know more and more about the lives of the other characters.

The points and decisions don't change the story (at least, not for now), what they are used for is to unlock certain "naughty" scenes and near the end of the visual novel, depending on the points and decisions, you can be with one or another character, or maybe none at all.

Ohhhhhh, i see, understandable . thank you for responding and hard work you put into this game !

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No problem and thank you so much!

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Would you consider routes on the next chapters? I think, adding routes will make the VN more diverse and variative. But if no routes for future/next chapters, that would be okay, for I have already fallen to the rector, the detective, and the coyote, but the latter seems a bit playboy.

The structure carried by the VN is essential to the story. Sorry if it's not what you might expect from any other.

Each of the main characters is a key player for Emeka. It may not seem like they're that important yet, but the story is still scratching the surface.

So there will be no routes. Just some different scenes depending on the decisions and points you get with each character.

I found this VN at random and I could not be happier with my dumb luck. All the deuteragonists are very well though. The overall quality game is very good. From the story to the small details such as UI. Keep the good work. 

Will version 4.0.0 bring Day 4 to all romance-able characters ? Or just a specific character ? I'm sorry I got quite confused.

There are no routes, no "dates" for you to choose from.

There is only one story with certain different scenes in the future depending on your choices.

Emeka for some reason is in love with the five main characters and the story unfolds with that in mind.

Depending on your choices for when the vn progresses you may end up with one or another character or maybe none at all.

Oh, I see. Thank you so much for the reply. I can totally understand why Emeka would be in love with those 5 hot studs though (As I would do the same haha ^-^)


Btw, if you can shed some light on this question : how many days do you plan on making in your VN ?

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It is a long story, there will be three story arcs.

The only thing I can say for now is that the first arc will be twelve days long.

Update!!!

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I LOVE this vn!

is their something wrong with files it sead 3.0.0 is out but all i see is 2,6,0

  

There is nothing wrong, it will be available next month.

Chapter 3 is available on patreon right now. 

It says "Next Update" on the most recent development log above, 3.0.0 is only available for patreons right now.

Is it just me, or does Erik look like Enji Todoroki?

I can't wait for the next update. I wanna know what will happen after. I got hooked with the plot and the game itself.

Really loving it so far! Its got me hooked!

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wait is jack strictly a bottom or does it depend on our choices

It was just a dream.

 If you really want to know the answer to that question you'll have to wait and continue reading the story :3

aaaaaa T^T

I haven't started this vn cause idk I guess I'll just start it now cause it looks scrumptious but I do have a question before I start, is the hot German shepherd detective a character you can date?

I can't say too much without spoilers.

We are changing the story to be more linear and you will find out in the next updates how it will be.

There will be no routes.

Jack is one of the five characters you can end up being with.

You will need patience and good decisions, but you will be able to be with him somehow.

Last time, When I downloaded the game, It kept bombarding me with  a notification saying file not found, I hope starting a new save state can fix that, Love the game 10/10, Keep up the great work!

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It is advisable to always start with a new save each time the game is updated in case something goes wrong.

Anyway if something goes wrong and the problem persists do not hesitate to comment it and we will see what we can do.

Also thanks for the support, I always get a good mood when you enjoy my visual novel. :3

Todo bien de momento, salvo por alguna coma mal colocada por ahí (no recuerdo dónde XD) pero da igual, los diálogos se dan a entender y me sacó varias risas. ¡Ánimo con este proyecto! :)


It is allright so far, except for some misplaced comma (don't remember exactly where XD) but its okay, the dialogues are clear and made me laugh. Keep up with it! :)

i love the steven universe music

Hehe, we finally have Toki update! hehe, He was my favorite because of his silly characteristics

An interesting story ^^ can't wait to read this (*^-^*)

Is Jack date-able?

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In some point yes, but he is super serious and shy (besides other problems) so his route can be slower than others in relationship terms.

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I just want to mention something, when Willem blushes, to me it looks more like a bruise than a blush ( in my opinion ).

Just started playing, love it so far! <3

Interesting, but for me MC is too much anxious, and that makes me feel anxious for him -_-

Love Toki and how he looks nsfw. His legs are drawn just perfect! 

Hope to see more and good luck!

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I know Emeka can be a bit annoying with his anxiety right now, but there is a reason for his behavior, and come on he is only 19 years old. Besides, I can assure you that hard times will come sooner or later and he will have no choice but to wise up. :P

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Interesting cast and concept! Seems a bit abrupt to be making route decisions when you barely get to know the characters, which causes me to fall back on Willem for being a known friend.  I'm not sure if this is route related to in part how the story plays out or romantic though, which would make a difference in my judgement.

The translation to English only had a few errors.  Biggest issue is that you need to recheck the entire script for/because of he/she, the wrong pronouns got used a lot.

We already checked for those errors. Did you play the first version? Because I think there is no pronouns issue anymore, so please let us know.

I Downloaded and Played 2.0.0

Love it

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Hi, I love the game so far!

I noticed you said English wasn't your first language, which is pretty cool! I was wondering if you needed someone to go over the English script and make edits to make the story more readable for English audiences. También sé un poco de español si algo no es comprensible, pero el español no es mi primer idioma. Gracias por el juego, y chau!

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Thank you for your offer, but right now we can't pay you and we would feel a little bad.

So not for now, but who knows in the future. :3

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I understand! I'd still be open to doing it later on down the line, even if it's uncompensated! I can't wait to see where this game goes!

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I suggest lowering the file size. Because some people may have low storage, it may cause problems if the final update has an insanely huge size and tends to be undownloadable to other people who have problems in storage, I guess and hope in the future you will keep in check of the file size. Some visual novels in itch io they have reached 7+ updates and they keep in check with the file sizes. Thank you

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We are currently working on it, especially on android. Don't worry about it. 

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There are a few Spanish texts in the English version but it's still well builded. I can't wait for next update!

We will fix it in the next update, thanks for report it.

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Quiero sugerir que uno pueda seleccionar el idioma antes de la adventencia sobre contenida adulta, o que esta advertencia se presente en ambos idiomas.

Lo tendremos en cuenta para la siguiente versión.

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